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Old 30th June 2008, 10:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Bouncy Castle Hire

Just like to show my latest site King of the Castles Rhyl Bouncy Castles Inflatable Hire - North and Mid Wales, Cheshire and Merseyside Bouncy Castle Hire in Denbighshire and get a little feedback/comments from my peers.
And also any problems with your different browsers
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Old 30th June 2008, 11:40 AM   #2 (permalink)
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You have go a slight problem with your smailing face in your main content. If you look at the text on the home page it gets obscured by the face, particularly over the black hair.
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Old 30th June 2008, 12:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Look and feel:
Nice site - simple, colourful and fun.

Information:
Exactly what your client and his/her customer needs - easy to find, concise information.
I say this having designed 3 such sites in the past.

Structure:
I'm seeing the same as knapper.
"order-gallery.html" seems a bit superfluous - why not link straight to "bouncy-castles.html" from the menu.

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More use of <p> elements instead of <br /> in the content text would benefit anyone using a screen reader.

Overall, just the job.

I see I should have searched the forum before choosing my username
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Old 30th June 2008, 01:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Structure:
I'm seeing the same as knapper.
Yes I agree and working on a sandbag to pad the bottom in the right corner but due to the site running from a cms it is being a small problem.

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"order-gallery.html" seems a bit superfluous - why not link straight to "bouncy-castles.html" from the menu.
I am now adding the games gallery so the order gallery is seperated into sections which I hadnt finished.

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More use of <p> elements instead of <br /> in the content text would benefit anyone using a screen reader.
Once again the cms is converting the page breaks to <br /> which solves the problem of breaking XHTML compliancy when in use. I decided it was a small trade off until I have time to implement a better way.
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